as you know me i will ciritcize ^^: - he looks tilted - the head doesn't change (this looks just not right) - in the animation the head is a totally different style than the body
BUT I am happy to see that we are doing progress here
corrections: take a look at the scene where Drew is a toon in Toonstruck 1. I mean when he gets this weight on his head. I think someone cut it out and posted it in a thread. our drew has too thick outlines i think and this is tottally emphasized by the style break between the body and the head.
I think the colour of the jacket is too... flat. On the face it uses a darker colour for the shadow. Can you do this on the jacket and letgs where appropriate please?